Ultimate Solace

into the folds of time

(time was never there)

I sink 

reality peels away the physical

(I was never here) 

crumbling like over baked cake

life leaves me waiting to be devoured 

dissipation of life manifested 

my own breakage 

finds solace resting in eternity 

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

another fine write to digest! just lovely, just awesome!

[duff]

This has emotional texture that captivates. Layers to be peeled away to see whats next. Hypnotic lines yearning for more. Clever word choice. Magic.

[Coyote Poetry]

The words gentle, but strong and meaningful. Yu made the reader think and left them with something to think about. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

damn, that was deep. loved the over baked cake part dear author :)

[Outdoers Adventure Trav..]

wohh that was intense..but a good read (Y)

[Ty]

Such heavy lines. "Reality peels away the physical." "Dissipation of life manifested my own breakage..." Enjoyed this.

[Ashwin Shanker]

fantastic lines KWP. .......

[Great Aunt Astri]

I think it was the image which inspired you? Momentarily reflecting on eternity and like the rock , seemingly timeless,waiting to be devoured by erosion. A nice reflective poem, which I enjoyed reading.

[KWP]

Ah, yes, hanging out at Uluru does magic to the brain .... When I was out there my headspace was full of clarity - thanks for stopping by Aunty XXX

[Great Aunt Astri]

You are welcome. My daughter has been to Uluru and said it was really mystical.

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmmmmm i hope i face such death with the same courage and revelation ... i like the tight packed depth of this one Elizabeth! nice job!
E.

[Ardra]

crumbling like over baked cake
life leaves me waiting to be devoured

mmmm :) oh i always love cake..and mmm to imagine as a crumbled over baked cake..

so much of stress can do that to us isnt it..over bake us..make us loose our flavour.. and then life expects someone else to eat us lol...

guess no one wants a cake thats not perfectly baked.... and then end we end up in the trash can :P

sorry i got little carried away with the cake ;)

thanks for sharing this with us :)

[KWP]

how can we not get carried away with cake .... mmmmmm cake!

thanks you my friend - always nice to get your unique trajectory ... :D

[Ardra]

hahah unique trajectory - i think i do that a lot with many poems.... ;)

[Ardra]

if you don't mind i would like to borrow your idea of over baked cake ..and write something myself :)