Slip Knot

musings on human relations

Slip Knot 

unintentional 

tangled mess 

we too and fro 

between yes and no 

the tug of you 

stronger than the 

me undone

I surrender 

easy to surrender 

at what cost 

you take all 

in return of affection 

ladled out in a teaspoon 

still, I surrender 

easy to surrender, 

to you

I am your strength 

you take rise and

use me as your slipknot

darling, at least tell me when 

you will pull the cord of release 

so I too can stand back and view 

my whole world come tumbling down 

to rebuild 

Reviews

[duff]

The reliance on another is dangerous. A seductive write boasting an underlying sadness. A yearning for a stare just to feel part of the conversation. Desperate measures it feels like. I really had fun exploring this write. Great job

[Wild Rose]

Reads (to me) as a mixed up relationship
Should we try again - Why I want to split up
I want to rebuild - i want release

See what happens in time

Sorry i'm in a mixed up state just now