March 23

 I didn't find any rabbits but I was digging in the dirt and found an old box. I had to break it open but I found a weird necklace inside. It's got a gold chain and a metal amulet on the end that looks like something out of a creature feature. When I picked it up it pricked me somehow and I bled for a minute. It was worth it though. I've got this. I'd show Uncle Lester but I think he would know I was in the old barn.

Reviews

[Not here]

i think it might be better if you put multiple journal entries on one chapter, as they are so short. but i like the story and keep it up

[Jordan]

It would save time, but would it change the effect? I'm not saying it's a bad idea, I'm just curious.

[Not here]

um it might change the affect a little, but i think certain entires could be grouped, especially towards the beginning. the last dozen or so are probably good left alone. like whenever you say "tommorrow i'll do ....." thats a really good spot to end the chapter. make it life a cliffhanger

[Jordan]

I'll look over it. Thanks for the input.

[Not here]

no problem and its just a suggestion. i really like it though. wish the journal would have had more in it or more descriptions of where the place was at or something

[Jordan]

That's the mystery, isn't it? It could be anywhere. *cue spooky music*

[Not here]

shhh dont do that. ill get nightmares. haha