Shouldn't Have

2/17/2011

Failing

At gaining

Fame

 

Lost

In the sinners

Lust

 

Gambling

Away, while playing their

Games

 

Putting

Your life on the line,

Placing the bets one last time

 

Confused

On how she lost, she falls to the ground saying “I

Can’t!”

 

Thinking

I must be crazy!

This game is never true!

 

Saying

I am the winner, this is the

Satisfying truth

 

Escorted

Out the door calculating all that’s lost

“Everything’s gone!” she shouts

 

What

Can I say?

She shouldn’t have played

Reviews

[Jim Parson]

You're on a role today! This is amazing...I think it could be your best work! This poem works on countless levels. Any reader will find that it fits their situation, whether in love, life, sex or anything else you want to name. How did you do that?? Just amazing!