Do you? Or not?

Feeling the need to

Run and hide

 

Feeling like the walls

Are closing in

 

Feeling like I can't

Escape.

 

Don't get me

Wrong

 

I love you and

All

 

But this makes me

Nervous.

 

Us is confusing

Me.

 

Do you want to be

Together

 

Or

Not?

 

I keep thinking

And thinking

 

About what

Would happen

 

If you picked

Someone else

 

Instead

Of me...

 

So now I can't take the

Pressure anymore

 

So just 

Tell me

 

Do you

Want to be

 

With me

Or not? 

 

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I really like how you described this. You captured that nervous, running-through-every-possible-scenario-over-and-over feeling perfectly.

[Lively]

Very well written poem. Our mind thinks much more on emotional aspects than anything else.

[Ian Faraway]

Short, sweet, and to the point....ask the most unanswered question because most of the time, people don't know how to answer