I AM A WOMAN

I AM A WOMAN...

         YOU MAY LOOK AT ME...AND SEE...

THE WOMAN BENEATH MAN...

THE ONE...WHO FOLLOWS...

NOT HER INTUITION...BUT THE INTUITION OF THE ONE ABOVE HER...

BUT I HAVE...NO ONE...

ABOVE ME...

FOR I...AM ME...

AND ME IS ALL...

FOR I...

AM A WOMAN.

-Kamal Trivedi-

Reviews

[Dai Edenburough]

Rather interesting poem! I feel that you are stating your independence from "men" or a "man" (I don't know what your trying to represent). But I LOVE THE FORMAT!!! SOOOO ORIGINAL!