Lovely Battle

Love is a battle

In a heated life of war

And at times I lose.

Reviews

[Pantatocat]

I really like your writing style x) It's always short, but you still get your point across! ^o^ Keep up the good work Kana! :3

[Olivia Ansa-Sam]

Hmm! Very insightful! "Love is a battle".

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Very true words. I feel the same way sometimes.

[Larry-Michael]

It's speaks volumes with so few words. I can tell you wont give up.

[KanaDream]

Thank you ^^

[Brielle Cartny]

This is a very hard concept for people to accept. Keep fighting!

[KanaDream]

Always! ^^

[Alexandra Hart]

This speaks to me on a personal level. I'm in a failing marriage right now

[KanaDream]

I'm sorry... at least it only says 'at times' that means that there are times when you win. I hope you're able to find those times :)

[Alexandra Hart]

Thank you for those words of encouragement

[Alexandra Hart]

I posted 2 more chapters of my story by the way

[KanaDream]

I'll check them out.

[alf]

Hi KanaDream. So aptly and succinctly put!!!! And, of course, so very true. Hope you intend entering all those contests that require brevity of words!!! You should do well!! Loved this, alf

[Mara]

I really like this poem, how just a few words can convey a lot of meaning :)

[KanaDream]

Thank you ^^ A few words always contain meaning if you look deep enough. Take 'love' for instance.

[Mara]

yeah defiantly! :)