Who I am

Describing me.

The person before you is but me in words.

My form you may not see, but real I am.

The voice silent, the eyes blind.

But before you I stand,

see me if you will,

hate me if you must,

love me if you can.

Author's Note

Any adivce would be appretiated

Reviews

[run vs remember]

I really like this. I will always love the simplest poems, and you did a great job of making it clean and simple, without taking away from the poem.
That being said, I think that if you chose to, you could add onto this a lot. But it doesn't NEED it. It's very good.