Tender Love

This poem is abt a woman who craves for love but never gets anyone to love her in return.

.             Tender Love

 

I am lonely waiting for sweet tender love to touch my heart, I sit alone
On the rocks of a sea side, waves high, so high that they come thrashing at

 

Me and then run back making me drenched with water from head to toe
But still my soul is not at peace it asks for more, something which I cannot give

 

Neither can I make my restless soul come to terms with the harsh realities of life.
Where can I find that tender love which fulfils my need for life? the love that I

 

Have so much within me, so much that I feel my emotions swim in it, swimming 
Like small fishes in a deep sea, my love is never less by distributing it.

 

Gushing out of my heart like a water fall,

 

 But the fact still remains I am deprived
Of that tender lover for which my heart aches.

 

Author's Note

True love is essential for everyone of us.

Reviews

[Jibey]

Here are the longings of a woman with a strong and beautiful heart... a poignant and moving song

[SJ]

This is really good, and it's been broken down well. You deffiantely get the meaning across and everyone can relate to it in some wya.

Keep writing!

[Rebecca Josephina]

So many people can connect with this and it deals with both the emotional and physical tole of an empty heart

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Yes nice and very very poignant..your write has a lot of potential,it has just the right emotions and a very very honest voice.What I suggest is that you use punctuation marks and structure it more,i am not saying this as a criticism,cause i myself stand no where but as the title of your poem..your words are tender and beautiful, i love the line..Neither can I make my restless soul come to terms with the harsh realities of life.It just needs more polishing.

[J.S. Pua]

nice..
this is beautiful..
i can feel the longing..
good work..

[HorrorMaster]

Very beautiful and amazing

[Dream Weaver]

Beautifully crafted and such longing
is only to be human. I felt every word
in its truest sense. Well done.