A Traditional Japanese Haiku

My first attempt at the 3 line 5/7/5 syllable style. I gave it my best shot.

Need humanity.

Hatred, hurt, pain, anger. No.

Come together now.

Reviews

[-inactive now-]

Hear, hear to that. Awesome job, man. A simple traditionally structured haiku, simple and straight to the point.

[KarMarBar]

Thanks! It was first attempt, so I'm really glad you liked it!

[Southern_Writes]

Short and sweet, a message ringing clear. Well done.

[KarMarBar]

Thank you. I was worried about trying to write a traditional Japanese Haiku because I never have before, but I am so happy you liked it! :)

[McBear]

Dang. I feel the feel of this poem, my friend. Great job

[wordman]

so lets all pray for peace,great write

[annalysiar]

Traditionally done. Powerful. Great work. Essential messages a best carried in small packages

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. You said enough. I pray and hope for peace and logic daily. Guns don't bring peace. Food, water and medicine open the door to peace.
Coyote