Receipt

Wondering mind

Depression

I want to scream

I want a thrill

To fear for my life

To rid of these dreams

Take my last breath

Rethink.
There's a better way.

Recall.

How did I get here?

Regret.

Forget the past.

Rebirth.

Become someone new.

Rebuild.

Take control of this lunacy.

Rebuke.

Who the hell am I kidding?

Author's Note

A poem I wrote on receipt paper at work awhile ago.
What do you think?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you use words. With few words making your points clear and understandable. I like the complete poem. The ending was perfect. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Slugger]

I think this one is good but could easily be great if you traitors and made it a little longer. It'd especially be good if you used a metaphor about receipts too.

[R.Ivan]

I like the way you end it, and I think the structure is clever. You can tell it fits on the back of a little receipt :)