We Should

A poem on let downs. ( sigh )

Yes we should hang out

but after you eat me out

 

Yes we should go to the movie

just don't forget to call me

 

Yes we should go to dinner

but you think that girl is finer

 

Yes we should go on a date

please don't be late

 

Yes we should see each other again

just don't leave me again

 

Yes we should get married

wouldn't we be happy?

 

Yes You could call me

you could love me

you could f**k me

you could leave me

but you will be an a*****e

if you would ( sigh )

Reviews

[Rain]

You know that's unfair putting your picture up there... Forgetting the picture...These are the tangeled thoughts of love. You expressed them well. I like reading your work. It is real, raw, not cluttered by mystical lines that leave you wondering what the writer was thinking. Good job.. Rain..

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Karen-

Well penned. Men tend to be a world of disappointment, and this is a real shame as there are so many very wonderful women on this planet. I hope that you will find a man who is worthy of your affections and who earns your attention.

I love the biting cynicism. Great job!

-Gabe

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yeah aside from that beautiful but distracting pic...WOW!! A very emotional piece of someone who is no good for you if they treat you that way... they aren't worth your time... nice penned, flowed nicely.