My F**k You Shades

I love wearing my F**k You Shades
cuz I don't have to hear what you say

Oh yeah...tell me how 'hot' I am
or how sexy I am

I heard it all before
Am I a w***e whom You adore?

If you can only see my eyes
I see through your lies

My F**k You Shades hide my disguise
liars like you I despise

I love hearing my F**k You Ipod
I don't have to hear about God

I can just bop my head and nod
your words make me yawn

Can't you see that I don't care
what you have to say to me

I love my F**k You Shades
I wear it when I need space

I love my F**k You Ipod
I don't have to hear you sod

Now please go away
Cant you see I don't care anyway

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Reviews

[~angelalala~]

I also have some F**k You shades, as well as a F**k You mp3 player, but my best weapon is my F**k You face that can scare the s**t out of anyone. People run away when they see this face, it's a great weapon. How I can relate to this piece. There are days, you just don't want to hear it. I like the easy flow and smoothness, as well as the attitude & sass here. great write.

[koty bell]

this was f****n awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Karen666]

thanks :P its what we girls think lol

[Ian H Morrison]

love it sassy and funny strong and not to be messed with

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes those F**k you Shades keep you safe from unwanted words and thoughts. Poem is direct and strong poetry. Great ending to this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tony]

well, f**k you then.

[MissWordSmith]

Normally I'm repulsed by ''f**k you'' kinda people. but I'm sure we'd get along!
You really do become rebellion, don't you?
There are times when rebellion screams ''look at me'', but you have a way with your words that balances the f**k-you aspect of rebellion, so as not to make it attention-seeking, which is what i love about your writing!
Keep it up gal!

[MarcoftheBeast]

i so love the way you describe and give sense to your works... i totally felt your poems and that is what makes it good, and great. write more... i am totally amazed with yer works.

[Michael Carr]

has some nice touches and some really funny parts.
not to mention a good deal of emotion put into such an original concept.
I still think you should try to write prose instead of rhyme poetry.
some of the rhymes in this piece come off as so forced, not to mention they barely even match up with what's going on in the story. it can be really frustrating for a reader.

that said, this is still a really solid piece.
keep up the writing.

[Kelley]

I say this with respect......
Some guys need to get a clue right LOL
Thanks Karen for a great write!!!

Kelley

[An owl on the moon]

So powerful, communicating both confidence and a sense of escape in our hope to find peace... Rhythmic like a song, your music moves through such a vivid tone. Amazing!