Happy Pages

A poem on how I am sick of MySpace and Facebook

I am tired of seeing happy faces

On these social website places

I remain faceless and nameless

as I come across your page

 

I see that you're happy

and already moved on

while I'm trying to hold on

to a love that wasn't there

 

I think its so unfair

to rub your happiness in my face

I see that I am replaced

Theres no more I can take

 

So i log off the site

I can't bear the sight

That you found Ms Right

I might as well die

 

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Longing for a world that's real... not a smiling charade... fake smiles covering pain... or loss... Very well done, hitting between the eyes... Thank you for your honesty in these powerful words.

[The Tao of Bri]

NICE FIEST!! !I AGREE!!!!

[Tina Kline]

I like what you say and agree with you. Its a very strong poem and I know
the emotion of wanting to die when things don't go right or as
we want them to.

Tina

[Robert Luna]

This was written with such a heavy heart. As the words drip of emotions and I am always so pleased to find that. I love to be left to feel and have words course through my veins as I feel connected to them. I truly thought you capture the essence of a place we who have loved and waited for love to see us has felt.

Great Job!!!!!

[Boris]

I can wholly relate to the feelings that you are describing in this poem Karen, heart-break is a horrible thing to go through.

[emz]

Very good write... i actually have a facebook page and i have enjoyed getting in touch with old friends...but i do understand you're frustration about these sights, they can be full of crap. Anyway i liked your poem.


x

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

yeah myspace is not much more then a playground for stalkers... I only have it to keep intouch with friends back East... love how you vent your frustrations in this one.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Tell it like it is, Karen. I am so not into "The Myspace Crowd." Different strokes for different folks, I guess. But, that just isn't my thing.

Great write! Your English is coming along very well.

Peace and love,
Gabe

[Lexy]

I know how you feel. I hate MySpace and Facebook too.