It's Hot In Here

Oh It's getting hot in here

so I should take off all my clothes

everyday is the same day

Hot in every way

What should I do to cool off

A golden shower will do me well

Perhaps you can do the spell

Spill me with your joy

Is what I would enjoy

It's the only way to cool down

From my mental break down

Oh it's getting hot in here

Why am I still wearing clothes

I should not be wearing those

I need a bucket of water instead

to pour over my head

 

:)

 

 

Reviews

[Ian H Morrison]

love it pure brilliance

[Dream Weaver]

How hot is too hot? Because this is off the wall hot!
Nicely scripted enticing and bold…I love it …

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Very cute. Love your work.

Peace and love,
Gabe

[Michael Carr]

Well written, it's sexual in a flirtitious way, not dirty, which is a pretty tough feat to pull in these types of work. I thought you rhyme scheme seemed much less forced (yay!) and more coeherant as well.
was def a fun read, showed a lighter side to your writing as well.
good work!

[bluessadmood]

ohh how lovely this is,little naughty,but quite ok ,ha ha,since its getting hot in here too ha ha..
its getting hot..shall i take them off,just a little or the whole lot..
every day ,it feels the same,never know whats got over me.all itchy
he is there standing in all my ways,sending hot waves all over me
what should i do to cool me down,shall i pull them off or cold shower will do
oh please could you help ..break the spell,and cool me down
its my mental break down ..its getting hot in here
oh these clothes still on..they should not stay too long
maybe need a bucket of water..or maybe have other thing in mind
just cool me down ..please
oh what lovely write exotic and so hot
lovely write..

[An owl on the moon]

Very playful, sensual, vivid... Your mood is upbeat and the words almost like a song playing on a hot day!