Short and Sweet

new poem :D

lying in my bed
thinking of things that you said
It's not you its me
but we both believe
you wanted to be free
so you can explore
and be a male w***e
thats ok I don't care anymore
if you call me again
ill ignore...nevermore

Reviews

[Jibey]

Great picture.. strong and blunt message.. Point made... well done!

[GTVile]

Hahaha, it's Shagrath! Awesome! I don't know what it has to do with the story, but Dimmu is awesome.

[An owl on the moon]

You strike back so sharply... the leaving.. the longing.. and you know too well the pain of freedom... Stunning form and flow that is filled with dark emotion.