Spring is here

I'll add more verses later!!!

Spring is here..... spring is there.

Spreading love..... everywhere.

Ringing the bells..... of your heart 

Bringing about..... a fresh start

Life spreads..... as the winter goes

Flowers dance..... as the wind blows 

Look at that..... clear blue sky

You can see..... birds soaring high

Can you hear..... that melody?
Taking you..... into custody

Its a lovely..... sight to see

Its a magical..... moment for me

Reviews

[Ana B.]

Very pure and sweet. Adorable poem, outstanding work :)

[Nene]

Thank you for reading!!

[Broken Serenity]

I love this poem. It's an excellent piece honestly. The rhyme scheme was nice, it was fluid and yet kept changing. Maybe not your intentions, but signifying for me the change of winter into spring. I simply loved the space between the words. I read it with the space that three periods would take and I could feel the activity in the poem. A previous review put it better than I ever could, " I liked the bouncy effect in the reading of this write. It was like your joy of spring bouncing through my computer." (Valentine). I most definitely felt your excitement and anticipation for the upcoming season 'bouncing around'.

[Nene]

I'm glad you got so much out of it.... :)
Yes I love spring and can't wait to see all the butterflies fluttering around.. and flowers blooming everywhere

[Ayesha Kaukab]

lovely poem but if you don't mind I want to point out that instead of "your can see", it should be, "you can see". Any how, I loved reading the poem.

[Nene]

Yes you are right I'll correct it
Thanx for pointing out!!!
Love nene

[Ayesha Kaukab]

you are welcome

[Mai L Nissen]

The composition works well to express a light heartedness :) I think we can all relate to that feeling coming out of the winter coma.
Minor thing, is it not suppose to be 'hear' instead of 'here'?
"Can you here..... that melody?
Taking you..... into custody"
And the 'custody' bit was a bit surpriing to me - but why not, if you are to be taken into custody by someone, spring is a quite good alternative :)

[Nene]

Yes you are right it should be "hear" instead of 'here'....
I'm happy you could relate to it :D.....
Hahahahahahahahaahhaa good point about spring.... much better than being arrested :D

[Nene]

:D i corrected it!!

[Valentine]

I liked the bouncy effect in the reading of this write. It was like your joy of spring bouncing through my computer. Nice Write. Valentine

[Nene]

I'm glad you enjoyed it :D!!!!!
Thanx for the reveiw!!!

[LadyAnn68]

It is freezing...snowing...and wet...spring is not here for us yet...but the thought is a lovely one and I for one can't wait! Nice write simple and uncomplicated!

[Nene]

Thank you for the review!!!
Its wet here too. Raining all day.

[LadyAnn68]

Personally can't wait till I do see the birds come and eat form my bird feeder...lol hahahahha

[Nene]

Wow amazing!!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Not here in Michigan. Cold and icy. I liked the poem. I'm hoping for the warm days of Spring to come. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nene]

Your welcome!!!
Best of luck
all good comes to those who wait ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[ANTO]

This blooms like a flower bed Nene and spreads a smile with its sunshine.

One line scared me though -
"Can you here..... that melody?
Taking you..... into custody" - I got a mental image of the reader (me) being arrested and taken away by a siren-screaming police car. Just me being paranoid I guess. ;p

this is fun and full of life, the font size and format all add to it. :)

[Nene]

Thank you Anto!!
hahahahahahahahah yeah I thought alot about using custody and finally decided to go with it :D ;)
Thank you for reviewing it

[ANTO]

and why not - it definitely works - Im just being silly
thanks for taking it in such good humour -
thanks for the craic xD

[Nene]

Hahahahahahaha naa i like it
It makes every thing more fun
I laugh alot at you reviews!! They are my favorite!!!
Your welcome!!!!!

[ANTO]

Well what is yellow and very very dangerous?

[Nene]

no idea...............

[ANTO]

Nope - thats the answer to the joke "what do you call Rudolph after he lost his sight"

whats yellow and dangerous = shark infested custard

[Nene]

oh hahahahahahhahaha