Looking at the sky

Why do we share our lives with strangers?

Looking at the sky

Hoping for a beautiful sunset

To post a picture

Sharing with others moments of solitude

Which should be only between you

And melted in the night sun.

We share with others our life

As payment proposing souls

To be liked.

We search for admiration,

Collecting jokes and backgrounds

Which use your phone store

To prove to everyone that we aren't

Lonely and live life in the whole

Just gazing at the sunset

Dispersing in the clouds.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

There's such a strong streak of honesty and logic in your finely put poem, start to finish. Seems you look into life with heart, brain and concetration that many can't collect together.. they prefer not to talk or reason at all. Is true, people do seek friedship with all the ingredients possible. Perhaps too, not always held by the finish but by the way others find your way unlike not like another.. hence reation and response isn't as full as wanted, needed - perhaps.