Echo

In the labyrinth of Stalactite caves, 

Hear the Echo of crashing waves, 

Wandering in a cavern of black and grey, 

For the Echo fades everyday, 

Rise to the roof exposed by a shaft of light, 

As I look into the rays blasting down. 

My call comes to me on waves of time, 

Carried by the Echo over walls of lime, 

An oasis beach, with trees of palm, 

With dolphins swimming around so calm.

From an outlet above water cascades down like snow. 

And splashing sounds fill the air on the Echo. 

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Don't you think that you're a great Rhymer!!
This write's showing here how much talent you've in your body , in your blood and of course in your veins as well. last few words're nice penned and showed and even explained me the the meaning of the title "'ECHO". Words're powerful and imaginary's great as well. I think i'm not getting some words to write on this review to appreciate you to your this write... but i'd like to say, it's an awesome piece and i loved this much. I loved here your Unique Rhyme too, what a great flow, do you know... i read out this piece in my flow and it's seemed like a Rap... isn't it!
so, i'm gonna keep this in my library and of course gonna save this write right now :)
keep posting such a nice writes... especially the rhyming one's.

[ron]

Beautifuly writen. Reminds me an unblemished place of solitude to be injoyed.

[Vria P Crow]

"Echo" alludes to Greek mythology; the name means "sound." The poem appears to be in tribute of the beauty of a voice, captivated by the sea. I like this ending more than the tragedy of heartbreak between Echo and Narcissus.

"My call comes to me on waves of time,/carried by the echo over walls of lime..."

The reader may interpret this as an understanding of l i f e and d e a t h. Time is personified by the cycle of waves; it is an endless spectrum. The writer has offered beauty with serene imagery.

Thank you for sharing!

[Kate Henderson]

I love Greek Mythology, so I would say this is pretty accurate. Thank you.

[Vria P Crow]

Your welcome, hon. I love Greek Mythology as well. :)

[Cat]

That's amazing! very well thought out :)

[Kate Henderson]

Thanks for reading Cat! Glad you enjoyed.

[Steve]

This is excellent! Welcome to our site!

[Kate Henderson]

Thank you for reading Steve!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is a very soothing and descriptive write. Nice job!

[Kate Henderson]

Thank you!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You have done a great job of writing.

Well written with a strong, clear voice and easy to read.

[Kate Henderson]

Thank you!

[mark]

this is a great write. i enjoyed reading this one. great story line to it. it rhymed very well and its something different to write about. great imagination. well done :) i was your first view :) and you got a review already good work.

[Kate Henderson]

Hey Mark! Thanks for reviewing my poem. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

[mark]

hey lol :) your welcome :) good first poem u made