Drowning

Can you hear me? 

Plunging deep down 

Water bound 

Hands like bricks 

Falling from earth 

Light fading 

No air in 

No air out 

Brain hits the panic button 

On red alert 

The will to escape 

Grows intense 

Reaching, reaching 

Pleading to the bricks 

Unleash 

Exhaustion but power 

The will never fades 

Pushing out 

Unleashing the Pythons 

Lifting up and out 

Life returns in an instant 

See the bricks 

Helpless still in water 

Can they hear me now? 

Reviews

[Misery]

I suspect much introspection leads to your unusual and lovely creations, dear poet.
Please keep gazing deep into the rhyme cellar of your soul, I delight in your vintages proffered.