Cosmically Aligned

Her nails are ruby red
Kind of like her lips
And they are both burning to be used
By no one in particular
But someone ought to do it
Just grab her and kiss her
Because a part of her wants that
Although she really doesn't know why
It could be because she needs it
Or maybe that she wants it
And all the recklessness it brings
She's in the mood for little black dresses
And ruby red high heels
Maybe even a little midnight dancing
With a guy she'll never see again
She's a little afraid that
Maybe what she means by
Her anxious, dishonorable intention
of "kiss me hard"
Is "two can play at this game"

Reviews

[Jaffa Forbes]

Very cool as usual, beautifully specific about just a certain emotion and feeling at one point of time. That's good because it suddenly becomes a lot more intense... i think. Love the changing colours, although why is 'ruby red' red at the start and orange later on? That's nitpicking perhaps because this is a great poem!

[Clockwork]

Star crossed and tempest tossed. Black night, and singing siren. Dance a carnal fulcrum of passion and pain. I like this piece a lot. There is a deep sense of need within your words. I enjoyed how you highlighted select words to emphasize the point. Well done.

[writer12]

i like the use of colors to make certain things stand out. great piece.

[Gathering_Stars]

the red really emphasises the playful and important aspects of this piece, it sets a great tone. This is great!