rain

quick little write about the weather

slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

I like this, K. Short and simple. Good write

[Blogger]

I like this. "Pitter patter pompous march" Very cool!

[W. C. Forrest]

It is a hard to believe that less than twenty words could work so much magic. Great.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

More of a saying then a poem, but I like it.
I could see this little saying on like some orderment in the shops, you know the ones with the cleaver little writes on them.
Very cleaver to think of a piece on something as simple as rain.
I liked it :)
Keep writing :)

[A. Amos]

Interesting and cool write....thank you for sharing

[max_vonnegut]

Why, this little poem is topnotch stuff, thank you for this!

[:o]

You're a fantastic poet. I love this.

[ayele marie dalmeida]

I love the rain too. Very nice:D

[kumars]

good .....rain....,...........

[Sami Khalil]

slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain


A splendid one...:).....................