an oddity

An observation in its tiniest form

It's odd how

those closest to our heart 

so careless with their words

litter our cheeks

with violent tears

while it's the strangers

so gentle with their words

who bring the blush to our skin

and curl to

our lips. 

Reviews

[Tom]

Yes indeed, quite often it's those closest to us in our lives that hurt the most !

A pertinent point, poetically penned !

[Katho28]

Thanks Tom!

[Lydia Shutter]

Certainly ironic....and so true. A brilliant observation! Lydi**

[Katho28]

Thank you Lydia!

[Deron Alexis]

lol true though it never occurred to me to write about it nice way to describe emotion ....violent tears blush to our skin curl to our lips.... love it

[Katho28]

Thanks for reading. Glad you like it!