Rain

A Poem by Katho28

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Platter of rain against the

metal roof, she lies upon her back,

ears open to

the teardrops of the sky.

© 2014 Katho28

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Tom

Nothing like the pitter patter sound of falling rain drops to induce a soporific state of mind!

Imaginatively creative in so few words, splendid indeed !

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks Tom :)

Lydia Shutter

You have said so much in just a few words here. The imagery is vivid...not only could I picture the scene, I could almost hear the raindrops. Excellent. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks Lydi, your comment has made my day :)

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Added on August 26, 2014
Last Updated on August 26, 2014

Author

Katho28

Sydney, Australia

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For me, writing is something that comes from the heart. I write not because I have to, but because I love to. Because writing is how I express my innermost feelings and thoughts. It's how I show peopl.. more..