Dreamer

Reminiscing in the late hours of night

A dreamer tonight is weeping.

Upon her palm,

a single teardrop 

shimmers in pain.

Blurring words muddled

by deceiving eyes, and

stained beneath her fingertips.

Dissolved

are his last words

yet why do they echo

so loudly, like thunder 

in her hollow heart?

Reviews

[Riding the Rainbow]

This is so beautiful, my friend.
I missed you and your work so much.

[MomzillaNC]

A moment of heartbreak and agony captured in so few words as to be like a breath caught in a sob…

[Katho28]

I tried to capture a tender yet distraught emotion. Thank you for reading.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Rana]

A moment of heartbreak described using the perfect words and with admirable skill. Short and remarkable piece.

[Katho28]

thanks Rana!