Day 1

Day 1

A Chapter by Katie Marie

Daddy,

   Do you remember when you told me that a rainbow always comes after the storm? Well, this storm is bad, really bad. It's one of those storms that seems to go on forever, with the huge black clouds and the terrifying thunder that shakes the ground beneath it. I'm scared daddy.

Daddy, please protect me.
I want this storm to end.

         Love Forever,
                      Nadia


© 2011 Katie Marie


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Is this the only chapter that you plan to have? I hope not because I would like to see more and see how the relationship between father and daughter is.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Katie, I've already read this before, but couldnt comment, :p
This is a good start, and I think you should keep going! it sounds like a really interesting book, I really have no idea what it's going to be about though :p so you should message me and tell me.
And we should also get started on ours together :p
Forever,
~Chey :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is great!
Shows how great the relation is between Nadia and her father (:
Wonderful work! :D
Keep going =3

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh...I was always a Daddy's girl. I can relate to this


Posted 14 Years Ago


we think our Dad will always be there to protect us from the storms and it is oh so sad when he no longer is

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sad, heart braking. Reminds me of me and my dad.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I like this. It sounds like there's some sort of hidden meaning behind it, some sort of pain or rough time she is going through. Please write more, I'd love to read it (:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 30, 2011
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Katie Marie
Katie Marie

Hippyville, WI



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I was introduced to this site by a friend who is an amazing writer. Thank you to my friend Cheyenne. About my writing: I don't ever write poems that rhyme. (So, if those are the poems you like to .. more..