Sheer Dusting

- Flecks of white, tumbling down, a sheer of dust atop the ground.
- The wildlife once about, scurried to be tucked away, as shortly following daylight, winter permits the day.
- Birds still flock above, on their journey to warmer state; pausing only a moment to catch regroup, the weather will not wait.
- A blanket of powder adorning, all within the sight; bringing a curious sense of childlike excitement- this presentation of snowy delight!

Reviews

[Relic]

This poem embodies the feel of winter and its seasonal routine. Although thinhs are not mentioned, I can conjure up many images just from reading this poem. Line 3 was a touch confusing and the word 'catch' in line 5 seems out of place. Other than that, I can feel the cold air and see my footprints on snowy sidewalks just from reading this.

[Kate H]

Thank you very much for your review as well as, your input. Constructive criticism is most assuredly a great thing in someone who does what we do. Appreciated greatly it is :)

[Relic]

No problem Kate. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Birds still flock above, on their journey to warmer state; pausing only a moment to catch regroup, the weather will not wait.
- A blanket of powder adorning, all within the sight;

[Kate H]

This as well perhaps?

[Sami Khalil]

:)....................

[Sami Khalil]

The delights of some snow falling in your region for children and adults alike. I like the idea that the weather will not wait...A splendid poem and the title was good too...:)............

[Kate H]

Thank you for your read and review!! :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)....................