Heartbeat

My spirits soar in your gaze
Your appetite for life: catching
Your intentions: genuine

My self proclaimed protector
And safe I am
Freedom in your love inspires me
To take flight

My stable ground
My lifeline
My heartbeat

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"Freedom in your love inspires me ... to take flight... " Very strong words.

Love's itself an inspiration to heartbeats which makes life full of wisdom, love and lights. Liked the realism of your poetry that certainly belongs to love. Lovely title you've chosen to write 'pon. Short, simple & beautiful generous stuff it is. Great job. I'd be looking forward to reading your work!

[Tina]

Thank you :) It reminds me of a quote "Someday I will find the right words and they will be simple." It's amazing how concise the profound can be expressed when the truth is met with clarity.

[Adam Adams]

It's seemed like a "pleasure" to me to read your insightful words. So, of course, you're welcome. Well, the quote you've shared with me is one of my fav. ones for sure. As far as I know, it's given by "Jack Kerouac" & take from (or written in) "THE DHARMA BUMS" book, but not sure of it. There's even some kinda deep inspiration hidden behind the veil of such words which further hustle the heart to think ov'r the scenario of life, deeply. Am glad that you found such things outta such wordy rush. Totally breathtaking.

[Robert]

A heartfelt piece here Tina. Short, sweet, and tender With emotions of the love you love.

[Tina]

Thank you! What a great review :)

[andrew mitchell]

Its nice to have some loved protection around. a cute adoring write!

[MAC]

okay, pls don't laugh or get upset but this can be applied to your favorite people (aka-dog). :) a wonderful write, Tina.

[Tina]

Awww! I wrote this about my husband but yes! It fits my little (90 lb) Scooter to a "T!" What a great insight! Thank you 😀