Abound

Preoccupied with brilliantly white fluffy clouds and butterflies fluttering all around me as I walk along a river trail

Head in the clouds
Float with the butterflies

Beauty abounds

Some days are harder than others
Choose to find heaven on Earth

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Here, you bake a very astounding & worth--reading concept of life with words. Seemed, you captured the whole dreams of your fantasy--land in shorty poetry to have "heaven" & "earth" mingled with love, peace & lights of delight. Seemed, every thing that's existing in this world's made to aspire + inspire you with philosophical bites... that you often love being around, dramatically. Excellent poetry you've come up with. Short, simple yet thought invoking as always!

[Tina]

Thank you! :D Mindfulness is a very heavy component of my practice and expressing this philosophical drama we call "Life" is a new chapter I've recently embarked upon. Expression, I'm finding, is proving to be a worthwhile endeavor. :)

[Robert]

This is really nice Tina. I love the shortness to this piece because it says exactly that you want the reader to know, nothing more and nothing less. I must say I did read it about five times out loud because it has such a nice sound. Did I say I liked it?

[Tina]

THANK you! :) My favorite part of this is its organic origin. I really have been, quite literally, preoccupied with the awe inspiring perfection of the clouds the last couple weeks and I really was accompanied by several fluttering big yellow butterflies today on my daily trek down the local river trail. :)

[Princess_of_Shadows]

it was good i think you shopuld add a bit more to it even though it is really good
~Princess of Shadows~

[Tina]

Thank you :)