Needle

Just a needle
Dragged across the skin
Skritch, scratch, drop, drip
A burst of red
Oh, sweet relief!
Tears stop falling
Darkness fades away
All that's left is red
Drop
Drip

Reviews

[Iam-me]

This is tragic and sad, to feel so numb and not connected to yourself that you have to stick a needle or a knife into or over your skin. To weep blood. To feel something. This is a cry for help, deeply depressing and emotional upsetting to read. Please get the proper help you so badly need. And keep expressing your emotions on paper and not on yourself.

[Katsura]

I appreciate the support 🙏 thankfully I have help and don't do it that often. Also, that's practically a poem itself 😂

[Iam-me]

Good to hear it. And keep writing and expressing your emotions.

[Jude-Cipher]

What a good poem!Keep it up.

[gram linski]

totally get this, sometimes you have to feel to feel, good poem

[Rye]

i feel this as a cry for help, I hope that you are. Sad write