Longing

A poem about wanting something you can't have.

As I reach
Further than I could ever hope to touch
I realize

This dream
This thing that I want with all my heart
Is not mine

And never will be.

Reviews

[Ren Nightshade]

I like this poem. It reminds people that are struggling that even if you are falling in a bottomless pit, there is still hope.

But I also like how the second part basically states, hey you can have a dream, but is it really yours or was it given to you?

Anyway, I really like how simple short, and emotionally impacting this poem was.

Keep up the wonderful work Katsura!!!

P.S. I love your name (^U^)

[Paul Bell]

Nothing wrong with reaching, even if there's no chance.
Shows great expectations.

[Katsura]

Unless you reach for the stars and fall off the roof.

[Violet Holmes]

Full of emotions, the way you express them is precious

[Rye]

such a sad write really, nicely expressed though

[Iam-me]

I could feel the disappointment within this wish filled poem.