Tribute to my Deceased Cousin

I had a dream about my deceased cousin the other night and I can't seem to stop thinking about her. I cried as I wrote this.

Dearest Angela,

You were beautiful: Your golden blonde hair cascaded gracefully down the sides of your face. Tall and striking, you didn't have much trouble earning everyone's gaze when you walked in a room. Your radiant smile could've put the stars to shame.

You were kind: You never seemed to mind lending a hand to those in need. You were well known as a girl everyone could depend on. You showered people with your love and compassion.

You were patient: I'll never forget playing with you, Debin, and Brittany. You used to paint Debin's and my nails. I remember using your toe separators as puzzles. We'd get into your stuff, but you didn't seem to mind.

You were wise: You knew right from wrong. You chose a great field of study-early childhood development, I believe-and you were studying it when you left Earth.

You were loving: You illustrated your love for others in many ways. You loved children and animals. You gave me a beautiful seashell and made me a gorgeous ankle bracelet.

I'll forever treasure the gifts and memories you gave me, Dearest Angela.

With Love,

Your Longing Cousin, Vivien

Author's Note

I used a picture of a baby unicorn because she was young-only 24-and she loved animals, especially horses.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

What makes this tribute so stellar is the way you include many specific details to paint the picture in a lasting way. Anyone would be so honored to be remembered this way. I love the uniformity of structure, stating a general trait for each paragraph, then fleshing out with details. Your lovingness is dripping sweetly from each memory. Very nice job.

[Kawaiikitty96]

That speaks volumes! Thank you!

[Moving Mass]

I have no word for this. This poem cannot be praised by something as simple as language. Memories are precious. All I have to say is thank you for writing this Viv.

[Kawaiikitty96]

Wow, your review really touched my heart. Thanks.

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem sorry for the lost of your cousin keep up the great work i can't wait to read more keep them coming

[Kawaiikitty96]

Thanks you so much

[melissa]

You're welcome

[zainul]

Very sacred and heartfelt tribute to a cousin and friend.
This is really a matter of pride that you had such a lovely and wise playmate.
Let's pray for her eternal peace.

[Kawaiikitty96]

Thank you.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.

[Dawn]

This is so beautiful. I'm so sorry for your loss.

[Kawaiikitty96]

Thank you.