Mangled

A Haiku.

mangled in thorns, red

- ribbons bleeding out her eyes

hopes rise and crumble

Reviews

[Lorry]

I never quite manage to get these haikus quite right, but I see that you don’t suffer from the same problem. I’m always impressed with how thought provoking so few words can be. I am impressed with your words 

[Kay]

Thank you! It's an interesting challenge trying to fit a whole lot of meaning or info into 3 little limited lines. I'm glad you liked this.

[Ghost]

Sounds like how I feel most times... Brief but full of pain, and description in a few words... Thank you for this write.

[Kay]

Sorry to hear that, I wouldn't wish anyone felt this way. =( Did something happen that caused that? Only if you want to share. Thank you for the read.