Little Do You Know

you feel unseen in this mess

a pebble in the center of a thrashing ocean

thinking my eyes are meditative on the current

everything a distraction from you

unknown to you in this wide frenzy

when you turn your head away i deeply stare

with waves rocking beneath my pupils

as i’m biting my lip to keep in the tide

Reviews

[Ghost]

True sometimes we feel unseen especially with someone we are close to... But they do pay attention to us even if we don't believe they do.. I like this write thank you for sharing it....

[Kay]

I'm glad you like it, thank you for the review. =)

[Perdition]

I don't "do" reviews because, who am I ?...but I'm not blind to poetry as it is my feast and when it comes and thrusts its obvious nature into breath you MUST at least recognize. In this my fingers are snapping. Thanks~

[Kay]

Thank you very much. =)