Finding Peace

A haiku version of what my friend always tells me to work on, as I am one who fights depression.

Always love yourself,

control your thoughts and feelings,

and you will have peace.

Reviews

[Ayushi Beura]

I really need peace...by the way nice writing

[Geo Lawrence]

I like the message you passed across through this poem. A wonderful choice of words; however, the haiku poem makes use of things we can see and touch. Through these things, something deeper is learned. Otherwise, this is a beautiful poem.

[Misery]

Peace as calm as a pool, love as solid as a rock.
I hope you will value your friend's advice, Koari.

[Gee]

Nicely done Koari.....................