Emotions

We view our emotions as our own, 

Individual, Secular, Lost, Alone. 

Fear of loss, Fear of rejection, 

Fear to be open, And fear of acceptance. 

So many of us, guided by feeling, 

Insiders voice, never quite revealing. 

For it could be wrong, we could be judged, 

Criminalised, demoralised, Mis-understood.

Author's Note

I might continue this one at a later date, I'm really quite proud of it. Let me know what you think, where I could go with it. If its worth continuing or if its done. :)

Reviews

[Aaliyah Grace]

I think that you should keep going with it. Overall, I like it. I know that I myself need to work on this, but I would check you'r spelling.