Ontario Girl

cute, silly, random old feelings

Ontario Girl

Tall blonde beauty

Eyes light grey 

She see's right through me

Intelligent cutie. 

She is sophisticated 

Her presence sublime 

Ontario girl, I want to make you mine.

Elegant in Red

You make my blood rush

Soft pink lips

Can't help but blush

As you move your curves to the rhythm

Your body a lustful sin

Ontario girl, your heart I want to win.

Ability to alter time

And make me feel like I'm alive yet dying

For your touch 

For your voice

As I lay my confidence on the line

Courage of a hundred men I summon

Ontario girl, want to go out or something? 

Ontario Girl, you're the most beautiful girl in this messed up world.

Author's Note

Cute poem about a silly little thing called love

Reviews

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I enjoyed this so much, just to see 'Ontario girl' repeated made me happy, my last serious girlfriend was a girl from Ontario.

[KeeD]

Oh are Canadian girls beautiful or what :) Hopefully plan to migrate to Canada sometime this year. "Fingers Crossed"

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Where abouts do you hope to end up, Toronto? Truth be told Ontario girls aren't the best. Way better here in Montreal...

[KeeD]

I'm most probably going to rent a place in Oakville

[Rajkamal]

Your poem has an innocence and honesty that most of us are so eager to lose...I wonder why? To borrow your clever words:
Innocence is "beauty" , honesty "sublime "
Things I look for most "in this messed up world."

[KeeD]

To have someone as talented as you repeat selected words from a piece I wrote is quiet an honor. Thank you for the review.

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is so gorgeous, beautifully written and what a lucky girl :)

[KeeD]

Thank you so much for the kind review.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome.

[misha]

This was a really sweet poem. Your use of imagery is amazing in the poems you write. Great job!

[KeeD]

thank you so much :D

[Eve]

I love this! It's got the right balance of sweet and sexy. Very nicely written!!

[KeeD]

Thank you, sweet and spicy is just what I was aiming for...it's like the 15secs of courage every man needs to approach a lady and start up a conversation :D

[Eve]

Haha, well you did it. :) Haha, yeah.

[KeeD]

Hey I was just reading your about me :D you seem really interesting and since you like dark generic stuff I mainly write about malevolent spirits etc. I have a series of poems uploaded on here about events taking place in a 15 year old girls life.. I'd love if you took a look at it and gave me some constructive criticism on it :D Do you write as well? :) i haven't seen any of your work uploaded as yet, looking forward to reading it.

[Eve]

Cool. Yep.. Cool, I'll check it out. :D Yeah, but I'm on my phone, and it won't let me publish stuff at the moment. :( Stupid phone!! Thanks. :)

[KeeD]

aww yeah whenever you do publish something send me a read request and i'll make sure to read it asap xoxo

[Eve]

Okay, thanks alot. :))

[Bluefire]

This is a cute poem. It makes me think of a pretty girl with beautiful golden hair and light crystal eyes, this poem makes me feel the love for that girl that the protagonist is feeling, it's masterfully put together in a way so that it's not just empty words.
Well done! ^^

[KeeD]

haha thanks :D i love your reviews you always make me feel so good

[Bluefire]

No problem ^^

[Simply Watching]

This is a very sweet yet slightly erotic and sexy poem. Very nice write and too cute with the line "want to go out or something?" XD Hah! Two thumbs up lover boy.

[KeeD]

Hahaha :P "blushes" thank you :)

[Simply Watching]

No need to blush. It was very good:)

[Tasha]

Aww this is so cute. Someone's been bitten by the love bug! :) Anyway as always Kee wonderful write as always and I love the colors added.
~Tasha

[KeeD]

^_- Thanks Tash, xoxo

[Tasha]

Nice face! You're welcome xoxo

[Rob Santana]

Hey I like this. Gotta give it up to the ladies. KEE how do you get the color. In the words.

[KeeD]

hey thanks bro, there's an option it looks like a small color pallet icon near the font bar on top of where you write your text. Hope this helps

[rnuff]

Aww this is so cute,
So very nicely written and flows well.
Awesome write.

[KeeD]

Thank you :D