Broken Record

Chin up all you broken hearts, smile and look forward to a brighter path

I'm like a broken record

Repeating the words that drive you away

Stuck in a familiar motion

Drowning in these feelings I have for you

Like a breeze I just fly passed your life

Keeping you warm when convenient

Forgotten in the blink of an eye

And now I try hard to make you notice

I'm never going to be good enough for you

Just a broken record

I'm sorry I can't be perfect

Was loving you even worth it

Now i'm going to try to pick up the pieces

Play another song and live for a while

Grow into a man from yesterdays silly child

Glue my shattered heart, smiling there's a start

I'm going to miss being handled by you

The way you played me like a tune

That chapters closed 

It's time for this broken record to be a whole

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Heartbreaking when what we have to offer is never enough....sad tune here but light at the end of this melancholy song. The beat goes on, so they say, only sometimes it takes a lot of practice to get our dance card back in order. Sweet read from you Kee, now put on your big boy pants & dance like nobodys watching! ;-)

[KeeD]

aww my angel :) thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Have missed you man, & change your profile by the way, you're no longer jobless, get with the program already! Luv you! ;-)

[KeeD]

oh i'm jobless again , project over :P xD

[Frieda P]

In between jobs, sounds better you bum! Just saying... ;-P

[chaotic katie]

loved the emotion and imagery in this piece. very well written, one of my favorites, fantastic job!

[KeeD]

i love your reviews and your poems :3 beautiful soul.

[chaotic katie]

thank you :3

[Mary Christabel George]

This was like a treat..:)
Thank you......:)

[s y e]

Woweeee Kee! This was touching and very nicely written, you're so talented hun, it was great!

[KeeD]

You're really kind :)

[s y e]

Haha, thanks. So are you.