quite expressive pieces...i really enjoyed each one...the first and last are my favorites...and there is some good philosophy, especially in those two...
nice analogies you make...clever writing, my friend.
hi Keegan, just found this. Very well penned and i can very much relate this whole concept, since i only play my precious Sims some are vampires or fake ones, mean, and i feel very close to them, they are my favorites and the funnest to play with. back this poem.
love the font and the emotional, intriguing, terror of imagery this poem evoked of this character... as well as the fluidity weaved through out this poem. thanks for sharing. this makes me miss my Sims...though i do not consider myself a real gamer. i don't know, either way...keep writing :)
Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..