jiNX

 

The world goes silent when I appear

the riot starter instilling havoc and fear

 

Do you hear the voices warn you in your head

about the teenage girl they say you should dread 

 

I'm a whole lot of crazy if you haven't guessed

a complete psychopath in a Forever 21 dress

Given up, done already? Ah men are such a bore

hasn't been a contender who can handle this 5'2" w***e

 

 Throw me back into the loony bin

Can never tame the crazy within

 

I''m a

Juvenile Intoxicated Nymphomaniac Eperiment 

 

but you can call me JINX

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ahena MK]

That was completely different from what i thought the poem would be about... keep it up really amazing

[Traci]

Your creative nature always leaves me in awe, dear sweet Kee. Another nicely crafted piece of art.

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was really awesome, Kee. Loved it. Cute but psycho is always best. xo Winter

[David the writer]

This is kind of kool. I like the idea, and don't mistake I like how it's done. I just have a hard time being afraid of a 5'2 teenage girl XD> Well done

[KeeD]

Haha I would too but some of these teenage girls can play you like a spider plays with its food before it's on to the next kill :P

[David the writer]

Idk, I deal with teenage girls, a lot of them like that, and it seems to be me doing the playing.

[Dye]

This is crazy good Keegan. Sounds like some girls I went to high school with. lol

[KeeD]

Haha hey Dyelicious, yeah got to stay away from the crazies but I seem to like them :P

[s y e]

That's quite smart Kee, nicely said and done. I liked it.

Loved the word play.

[Caradoc]

This was really clever. I found myself smiling at the end due to your wordplay. Those pictures though, definitely help drive home the crazy in the narrator's personality. jiNX, huh? I am glad I never met any girls like her when I was in high school.

Well done.

-Caradoc

[KeeD]

haha thank you, I wonder what it would be like going to school with such a girl :D she'd make and break a persons world :P