Shaded in

The blank rose 

Transparent, lost

Shaded into her imperfections

When lovers feel crossed

 

A secret whisper

Hidden within the vines

Truth to be desired

Fatal was the signs

 

A tale of thorns

Tangled up into one soul

Graced into her image

For whom lovers toll 

 

 

Reviews

[Ms. Tutolo]

Tangled up into one soul, that hit me hard. Really shows the amount of love and emotion in the poem. Keep up the good work!

[DIVYA]

A blank rose...that line got me. Blank yet intriguing, her essence, her reality embroied with thorns...intrigue. It made for beautiful poetry, Keegan!

[KeeD]

Thank you for your kind words Divya.

[DIVYA]

It was such a pleasure!

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and powerful use of words and thoughts.
"A secret whisper
Hidden within the vines
Truth to be desired
Fatal were the signs"
I liked the above lines. All of us have private wishes we make in silence place. Thank you Keegan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[ms. barrie]

i have to say, Keegan...that your two recent writes
you've shared...have to be one of my favorites from you.

this reads as a gothic romance {lyrical cautionary nursery rhyme}
a faerie tale...of heart's illusion s.

you're pen never fails to deliver such captivating, unique
imagery that pierces the reader's psyche. I adore the
dark imagery and stunning word play. msg me when u can
to let me know of any new writings. looking forward to
're visiting your ink
~ Namaste (:

[KeeD]

Thanks hun, haha I love how you see it as a gothic romance, that is so cool and awesome. Love looking at it that way now that I see it. Thanks for the cool review . Namaste :D

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome , doll. keep up the great work.

[Ruth]

Wow...just so palpable...the very first line had me engaged in thought, brilliant :)