B*****d Son

B*****d Son

A Poem by KeiferX
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good for nothing father >.<

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I stand before you Father, 

but you refuse to see

Oh Father, have I fallen from the tree

of good grace, our last embrace

now a memory

Oh Father, have you forgotten me

 

I kneel before you Father

But you do not feel

Oh Father, have you forsaken me

I am your flesh and blood

Dear Father, look at me! 

I am your ill-begotten history

© 2011 KeiferX


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Poignant and full of emotion. Too many children could relate to this and that is saddening.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love the undrlying double meaning(it might not be there, i tend to over analize) about god, i kneel before you, good grace, fallen from tree. it's loke your father is god but he doesnot want you, its really heartbreaking.
Scisenheartxx :'(

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 5, 2011
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KeiferX
KeiferX

Brooklyn, NY



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my name is keifer, 19yrs old ..living in brooklyn NY more..