Lies

This is whatever you want it to be.

Immersion. 

Illusion. 

The way we live. 

How they differ, 

is lies. 

Shadows cover our eyes. 

what purpose, 

what hope. 

lies. 

lies, 

lies. 

Death. 

Sorrow. 

Depression. 

Death. 

Never stopping. 

Never ending. 

Silhouettes of light, 

through the darkness. 

Gone.  

Together. 

Reviews

[SariahM]

lies.

lies,

lies.

Death.

Sorrow.

Depression.

Death.

I love the repetition of the words, It kind of adds an echo to your writing. Well done Keira!

[Vegetarian Wolf]

I like the simplicity and the choosing of words. especially the juxtaposition of the two lines

Shadows cover our eyes.

Silhouettes of light

hope to hear more poetry.

[SariahM]

I love It, especially the part about... LIES!