I can, but I don't

This is whatever you want it to be

I can see you,

but I have no eyes.

I talk to you,

yet, have no voice.

We reach out our hands,

they don't touch.

I know your warmth,

I can't feel it.

Separated by borders,

our souls connected.

I know who you are,

yet, I have no idea.

Reviews

[jesserose99]

I think we all want for that someone...and feel that someone out there. I know a lot of people don't believe in their 'other half' so to speak, or something of that nature. I think some people feel it strongly because it is true for some souls. I don't know but your poem makes me ponder all of that stuff. very nice work

[Coyote Poetry]

Interesting flow of words. Left something for the reader to ponder. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[Yehshaihah]

this is amazing. to me it shows a lack of emotional attachment to reality and a longing for feeling. its really deep and very well written.

[McBear]

Hmm. some of it reminds me of a long distance relationship while the other is a mystery. very well done! I loved it

[fierceauthor]

This is a mysterious one, but interesting

[Shielah Yuyama]

I love the way you wrote this! :) Simple yet the emotion, the intangible presence, is strongly affecting :)