My Love

with beauty and grace

you cross the room

blood starts to rush

my heart in full bloom

 

your eyes, they captivate

with lips so lush

hearts accelerate

against your body's brush

 

my love i surrender

this life not my own

lost in your splendor

our seeds are now sewn

Reviews

[Crystal Ellyson]

A great and beautiful poem!!! I really love it!!!!

[wordman]

a beautiful poem of feelings and love

[kar]

thank you so much for reading and commenting; i truly appreciate it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and beautiful description for beauty and love. I had to read again for the pleasure of the words. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[kar]

thank you so much! it means a great deal to me when i read comments such as yours. as of late i have had a hard time wanting to write; your words inspired me more than you could ever know.

[Coyote Poetry]

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