NEED!

For everyone that has ever felt the driving Need! to be with a loved one, and of course for my loving fiance, David, I love you Honey Baby!

NEED
My flesh weeps to
be filled with your
presence.
my mind silently
screams your name
my throat locks up,
I gasp!

 written by Kelle T.
June 13, 2008

Reviews

[Michael X]

This is powerful and written in essence.. i could feel my own throat locking up as i read
in way your words take hold of the reader and being a short work..is highly effective
the heart is impacted before one realizes the poem's finished.."need.. casting forth
ever desires.. sensusously passionate exuding..delvingly charged metaphysical romance
portrait longing.. kel-this is very beautifully surrendered- would capture any man's heart

my mind silently
screams your name
my throat locks up,
I gasp!

[Murphy]

Oh, this is wonderful... congratulations to you and yours! A very powerful expression, I tend to think he could feel it even if he were on the other side of the world. I wrote a poem titled Submerged... will send you a read request; for some reason that is coming to mind as I read your words. Excellent write, thanks for sharing!

[William B. Burkholder]

very nice Kel

[Steph]

i like your use of the caps and the exclamation point. they really get your point across.

[Adela Muresan]

A good way of expressing such extreme desire.

A.M.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow, you said so much in so little... It makes me want to read it over and over... Great job!! So beautiful!!! it captivated me and flowed amazingly... :)