Shopping with my mom

This story is about me going to miz moose with my mom to shop for boots and shoes.

I remember shopping with my mom at a store called Miz muze located in Manhattan. That store sold shoes, boots and sandals. One day I went inside the store miz muze with my mom and so far I liked the shoes and boots that I saw. So I decided to try the shoes and boots on inside the store I asked the store manager for a size eleven in both shoes and boots. So she goes to the back of the store to see if there was a size eleven. And I was in luck because the lady said they had my size in the shoes I liked. Once I got my size I tried on the shoes first and I walked around the store in them and I liked the way they felt on my foot which was comfortable and the color shoe was gray that I chose. The second thing I tried on was the boots and the color of them were blue. When I tried these boots on my feet were warm and comfortable. I told my mom I liked both boots and shoes. So she decided to pay for both and the amount came up to three hundred dollars. I was so shocked it came up to that amount but my mom didn’t mind paying the money at all. After we were done with shopping we went to checkers I ordered a bacon cheeseburger deluxe with fries and a fruit punch drink. My mom ordered a double cheeseburger with fries and a Pepsi soda. The food was delicious at checkers. From then on, I was so happy I got my new shoes and boots to wear.

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[Samuel Dickens]

I think it's good that you wrote about this pleasant memory. We won't always have our parents, so little snippets of life well spent with them will bring great comfort one day. You write quite well.