Forever Lost

She is forever lost

in a world of despair.

She is forever gone

in a world of misery.

She cries out,

but no one hears her.

She yells out,

but no one listens.

All she wants is to be noticed,

but she isn't.

All she wants is to be found,

but she isn't.

Glass shatters

all around her

reminding her of her past,

reminding her how she got

forever lost.

Screams replay

in her mind,

reminding her of her past,

reminding her how she got

forever lost.

Why 

she asks.

Why me

she questions.

The answers are

never to be found,

for she is

forever lost.

She is forever lost

in a world of despair.

She is forever gone

in a world of misery.

Author's Note

Please keep in mind that I'm not a poet. This is all off the top of my head, and I free write because I hate to rhyme.

Also, I made this to make you all think about what I mean by "forever lost."
Can you all guess?

Reviews

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Young writer, again I am amazed by the depth of experience in your writing in relation to your chronological age. This took me back... to when I began my own writing. Actually I have a poem here that I wrote when I was 12... but I have scores of journals as well... all illustrating this similar theme. The invisibility of the wants of a young woman coming of age. I hope it pleases you to know that you are in the company of "every woman" who has ever been - well modern woman anyway. Your feelings mirror that of thousands of artistic deep feeling women who have walked before you. To say - young lady, you are right where you are supposed to be, with the advantage of being able to enuniate your feelings - where many cannot. I related. Enough said. :)

[KennaLovesJake]

Thanks! :)

[Forever Hidden]

Nicely written! I've been writing poems for over 2 years now, and none of them are as good as yours! Keep it up :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

i can understand your writing because i have that feeling.
i like it.. :)
keep try writing poems~

[KennaLovesJake]

Thanks.
I'm glad you like it!