Us

I tried just as much you did

But I don't know what you want from me

You keep everything hidden from me

If you would just let me help you 

Please let me in.

We can't ignore the situation 

We can't ignore each other.

You said this was love

And it felt like love

But can love survive this? 

Reviews

[devon]

The last line is my absolute favorite. It's a question that gets asked thousands of times in a lifetime, I'm sure. The real question, though, is what love can't survive.

This is a real emotional piece, and it gives of tones of regret, heart ache, spite, and yet, longing. You did an AMAZING job with this, and I hope to read more from you.

[Kennedie]

Thank you sooo much :)

[devon]

You're welcome!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Very emotional piece. It feels so real and honest and I love how simple and poetically you portrayed this situation. lovely and sad
God bless