The Smudge

Well This Sumdge Appeared After The Johovia Witnesses Stoped By

There Is A Sumdge On My Window

It Makes My Left Eye Twitch

It Happened Just Yesterday

Thoes Johiva Witnesses

They Have Cursed Me

With This Smudge

If You Squint

It Looks Like Jesus

I Lay In My Bed And Try To Close My Eyes

I Think Of The Sumdge

It Is My Worst Fear

The Sumdge Has A Name

.......

Rollo

 

 

Author's Note

Oliver And I Discovered This Sumdge And It's Name Is Rollo

Reviews

[Fear Corrupts!]

uhm...okay...something like that would bother me too...a smudge...yup. I like it. Congrats!

[ABBY]

i would have never thought that a poem about a smudge would make me laugh.... but it did. it seens like you hang out with "oliver" alot

[bailish]

Love it! But I suspect the smudge doesn't resemble Jesus all that much. It sounds more like a guilty conscience, perhaps for being less than hospitable to the Jehovah's Witnesses. Why else would you suspect that they placed a curse on your house?

[Last Lying Look]

ahahaha. Good poem. Made me laugh & it's extremely creative. Good job!